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Farewell My Love by ~Townuri:iconTownuri:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I will never see you again
This realisation, this cognition
Discolours my essence, ripping out
My heart, filled with weakness
It feels as if a venom
A poison is draining me
I imagined I had felt all
Every possible emotion
For you
Since for more than three years
You have preoccupied my being
Unconsciously
Though I will never see you again
This sheer hopelessness
This utter despair
Exceeds all the tears, all the pleasure
All the resentment, all the angst
Oh! the discomfort you brought me
I won’t ever see you, ever again
But I’ll never fail to remember you
Your kindness, your benevolence
Praising me without cause
Your eyes, in which a universe is veiled
Sparkling as sapphires
Your smile, so excruciatingly sweet
Providing hope and misery
Your skin, smooth and passionate
I’ll never see it again
Your countenance so fair and serene
Save for in my dreams
Haunting me, till I give up the ghost
A delusion I never tried to seize
The words on my lips never spoken
I love you
I love you
But I’ll never see you again
©2008-2009 ~Townuri
:icontownuri:

Author's Comments

I wrote this to a very special person, a person whom I'll probably never see again.

Farewell my love~

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!Nakamura-Sakura Jul 1, 2008, 10:43:56 AM
Woah. That is just so beautiful ... it nearly made me cry. :)

please could u tell me the story behind the poem? x

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I don't like seeing men and women kiss, so apparently I'm heterophobic. I also don't like seeing elephants dry hump 90 year old giraffes, so what the fuck does that make me?!
:iconzv2mskl:
~Zv2mskl Jul 1, 2008, 11:20:03 AM
I'll tell you now what I've told you before: I think it's beautiful, I have no other words for it. It's very sincere and actually touches me, something a poem doesn't do very easily to me.

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All the sorrow and the pain
will be washed away by rain
- Stratovarius, Season of Change
:icontownuri:
~Townuri Jul 1, 2008, 11:50:03 AM
Thanks a lot for the comment! I wasn't expecting that, no, not at all! ^_^

Of course I can tell you the story behind it. I'll send you a note.

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While I'm staring at the roses, the melody of death flows
:icontownuri:
~Townuri Jul 1, 2008, 11:51:02 AM
Thanks a lot for the comment! It touched me too, when I was writing it. Oh, happy times, those 'emo moments'. :P

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While I'm staring at the roses, the melody of death flows
:iconlost--dreams:
~Lost--Dreams Jul 3, 2008, 6:39:10 AM
And so i never knew! currious for who its written though :D
well this is wow well great awsum i love it ill fav it :D

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As a vampire drinks my blood,
As a wearwolf staring at me.
You are just one of them,
Another fantasy!


Take a look at my :gallery: [link]
:icontownuri:
~Townuri Jul 3, 2008, 10:22:47 AM
Thanks a lot for the comment. ^_^

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While I'm staring at the roses, the melody of death flows
:iconlost--dreams:
~Lost--Dreams Jul 6, 2008, 11:37:07 AM
nP

--
As a vampire drinks my blood,
As a wearwolf staring at me.
You are just one of them,
Another fantasy!


Take a look at my :gallery: [link]
:iconspinner1526:
Mood: Emotional ~Spinner1526 Mar 19, 2009, 4:55:14 PM
(whispers) : wow; this is just.......it's beautiful, and sad. i need to start writing again.
:icontownuri:
~Townuri Mar 20, 2009, 10:14:31 AM
Thank you so much. ^_^ I actually need to start writing again as well.. I find myself doing it less and less. :/

Thanks again, it means a lot to me. :)

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While I'm staring at the roses, the melody of death flows
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